Researching for Stories Set in the 1800’s – Melissa Maygrove
Thank you for hosting me, Diane! I hope your followers enjoy the post.
Writing novels set in the 1800s requires hours of research, if the author is to create a realistic, believable world. Although most readers are unaware of the work that goes on behind the scenes to produce a quality product, avid readers of historicals are well acquainted with the period. Anachronisms, at best, pull them out of the story and, at worst, make them put down the book.
Some of the countless questions that must be answered during the plotting and drafting phase are: Was that city a city yet or that state a state? Had ___ been invented? What garments and undergarments did people wear, and how did they fasten? How long did it take for a letter to get from point A to point B? How much was the postage, and who paid it? How far could someone travel on horseback in one day? What about in a covered wagon?
That barely scratches the surface, but you get the idea.
Next is character behavior. If characters don’t act according to the social mores of the time (or have a plausible excuse not to), we risk turning off readers. Of course, we must take our character’s background and circumstances into consideration, but generally speaking, people were rarely on a first name basis with each other as we are today, and they dressed very modestly. Conversations were rather formal. Many words that are commonplace now were not said in mixed company, e.g. the term ‘limb’ was used because ‘leg’ was considered vulgar.
Bottom line: If you plop a character into a historical setting then have him or her behave as if it’s the 21st century, you’re going to lose readers.
As should be obvious from the previous vocabulary example, we can’t assume that a word or phrase that is used today was used then. Once the writing begins, we must scrutinize every word. I check anything suspicious with an etymology dictionary. If it wasn’t coined yet, it almost always gets cut. Rare exceptions are creative license decisions, such as using ‘okay’ in place of the period-correct ‘O.K.,’ because the correct term would be more distracting to readers than the anachronism.
And then there’s The Tiffany Problem to consider, when readers think a name or word that has been used correctly is a mistake. (Yes, ‘crepe’ really was spelled ‘crape’ in regard to mourning attire.) Oy.
My latest western historical romance, Battered Pride is set in southern Oregon Territory (early 1850s), in what is modern-day southwest Idaho. Prior to the opening scene, the heroine and her husband traveled west and registered for a land grant. The law required them to cultivate the grant for four years and build the necessary structures to gain ownership. By the time the hero encounters the heroine, she has been widowed and is struggling to do that on her own.
Obviously, I studied period farming practices and land grant laws for the story, but a large chunk of my research centered around the Mojave Indians. The hero in Battered Pride is half Mojave, half white and was raised among the clan. To write authentically from his POV, I had to learn all I could about that culture.
I read everything I could get my hands on. I studied the clan’s way of life, their religious beliefs and practices, and more. I was surprised to learn that some aspects of Mojave culture were different from other Native American tribes. They constructed permanent dwellings, and they had relaxed views on marriage and sexuality.
My best find was an English-Mojave dictionary in a UCLA paper on linguistics. Not only did that allow me to include some Mojave words and phrases in the story, but the definitions in the Mojave-to-English portion mentioned interesting details I did not find elsewhere—such as the fact the Mojave would bury hot coals under a woman’s bed mat to ease menstrual cramps.
The research aspect of writing historical novels is time consuming, but it’s also interesting, and even thrilling when you happen upon a hidden gem. Some of the best scenes in my western series were inspired by research.
Battered Pride (Forging America Book 4) by Melissa Maygrove
Western Historical Romance, Truelove Press
Find it on Amazon
Passion knows no prejudice.
Eva McCabe may have been raised in the genteel tea rooms of North Carolina, but she isn’t one to surrender. Even after finding her husband’s scalped and mutilated body in the field of their Oregon Territory land grant, she refuses to leave. But tenacity won’t be enough. If she can’t meet the grant’s conditions of cultivation, she’ll forfeit her independence and all 640 acres.
Hatchoq is a man of mixed blood and clashing heritage. His father’s people tolerate him, and his mother’s people want him dead. When he kills a rogue member of his clan to save a white, he’s doomed to wander brutal lands alone.
Hatchoq camps on Eva’s land and secretly lends the struggling widow some aid. Once his presence is discovered, Eva is torn between bitterness and need. Reluctantly, they work side by side, farming her land and navigating a burning attraction neither one wants. Love grows as stubborn walls of hurt and anger crumble, but can it survive? If Hatchoq stays, he must deny his Mojave identity or risk both their lives.
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Hatchoq is a man of mixed blood and clashing heritage. His father’s people tolerate him, and his mother’s people want him dead. When he kills a rogue member of his clan to save a white, he’s doomed to wander brutal lands alone.
Hatchoq camps on Eva’s land and secretly lends the struggling widow some aid. Once his presence is discovered, Eva is torn between bitterness and need. Reluctantly, they work side by side, farming her land and navigating a burning attraction neither one wants. Love grows as stubborn walls of hurt and anger crumble, but can it survive? If Hatchoq stays, he must deny his Mojave identity or risk both their lives.
To be notified of new releases, you can follow Melissa Maygrove's author page on Amazon or sign up for her newsletter. Newsletter subscribers get a FREE, exclusive book when they sign up!
And Tyrean Martinson has a new release, too!
Dark Blade Forged by Tyrean Martinson
The Dark Blade Trilogy, Vol. 1, Sword Fantasy/Christian Fantasy
ISBN: 979-8-9870648-6-3
An ancient blade buried deep within an abandoned tower of the Watch Guard calls for its next wielder.
In a world where ancient powers stir and darkness threatens, Dan Torren seeks to escape his noble family's corruption by joining the mysterious Watch Guard. As Dan and his allies uncover a sinister plot involving the Red Hand, an organization trafficking in human lives, Dan will need to confront his own inner desire for vengeance.
When he discovers a legendary and strangely shadowy blade, he's thrust into a destiny greater than he ever imagined. Alongside his friends—Alex, a conflicted prince, and Farrald, a would-be Shepherd—Dan must navigate political intrigue, confront dark forces, and face his own family's twisted legacy. Dan's journey will challenge everything he believes about justice, power, and his own identity. With the fate of Septily hanging in the balance, can Dan forge a new path for justice?
In a world where ancient powers stir and darkness threatens, Dan Torren seeks to escape his noble family's corruption by joining the mysterious Watch Guard. As Dan and his allies uncover a sinister plot involving the Red Hand, an organization trafficking in human lives, Dan will need to confront his own inner desire for vengeance.
When he discovers a legendary and strangely shadowy blade, he's thrust into a destiny greater than he ever imagined. Alongside his friends—Alex, a conflicted prince, and Farrald, a would-be Shepherd—Dan must navigate political intrigue, confront dark forces, and face his own family's twisted legacy. Dan's journey will challenge everything he believes about justice, power, and his own identity. With the fate of Septily hanging in the balance, can Dan forge a new path for justice?
Find Tyrean here: website / blog / podcast / Instagram
Have you ever researched for a story set in the 1800's? Do you enjoy historical romance or Christian fantasy?
13 comments:
Great tips here for making sure historicals are accurate and consistent. Smart to check an etymology dictionary.
Thanks for hosting me today, Diane!
Congratulations to Tyrean on your new release!
Most welcome, Melissa.
Thank you so much!
So much research!
I find it interesting to read the afterwords by authors when they talk about the things they found out in research that might seem wrong to us but aren't.
I try to avoid writing anything historical, for all the reasons Melissa has mentioned, but my current protagonist wants to take me to the moment of her birth, slap bang in the middle of WWII. At least I have local people I can ask for first- and second-hand knowledge.
I love research! :) Congrats to Melissa and Tyrean!
Congrats to Tyrean and Melissa on these wonderful new releases and agree on the research. It stretches into infinity:)
'Lo, Diane.
Great tips, Melissa! One of my WIPs is set in 1913-1914, so I've been doing a lot of research. Congrats to both authors.
Yay for Melissa. Must be a fun, informative challenge to take a storyline back that far. I've not done it.
Thanks, Melissa and Diane. Cheers.
Hi Melissa - yes I can imagine there's lots to learn ... I suspect if one set the storyline in Europe - you'd be still researching! But bringing the stories to life is so important - well done. Good luck to you and to Tyrean for her recent release ... cheers and to you Diane for hosting - Hilary
What an interesting post. I can imagine writing a book about 200 years ago would involve a lot of research. Such great tips for how to make the story seem authentic. Thanks for sharing. Wishing Tyrean all the best!
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